So your paper focuses on the politics involved with abortion? Maybe try to word it differently, it could work to your advantage. Such as "There is much controversy surrounding abortion especially from those people who take a clear stance of pro-life or pro-choice.
From this, I assume your paper is about abortion and its viewers beliefs. I agree with Will, possibly take his advised version of your thesis and throw it in your paper. It'll make your paper appear and sound very professional, making it also look complex! :)
The phrase "especially political type of people" sounds really elementary. Talk about how political issues are very contraversial in the political world, and how this contraversy effects the political world. Don't ever take Will's ideas, he's dumb.
So your paper focuses on the politics involved with abortion? Maybe try to word it differently, it could work to your advantage. Such as "There is much controversy surrounding abortion especially from those people who take a clear stance of pro-life or pro-choice.
ReplyDeleteFrom this, I assume your paper is about abortion and its viewers beliefs. I agree with Will, possibly take his advised version of your thesis and throw it in your paper. It'll make your paper appear and sound very professional, making it also look complex! :)
ReplyDeleteThe phrase "especially political type of people" sounds really elementary. Talk about how political issues are very contraversial in the political world, and how this contraversy effects the political world. Don't ever take Will's ideas, he's dumb.
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